Peer Review

I didn’t have the standard paragraph formed rough draft for class today. I was a bit anxious thinking that it would be misunderstood. So, when I read my comments I was upset to read that someone told me that I need transitions and that the words were “just there”. Well obviously in bullet-ed form transition are not necessary. I must say Bravo for someone noticing that my sentences were “just there” beside my bullet points. I thought it would be obvious that the facts would be straight forward and transition-less for the form I chose. I guess it is my fault though for not using paragraphs.


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